Hello again!My friend Edi thinks that I should show you my Haiku. When I read yours I liked it very much! SO, I spoke one right away. Edi wrote it down, she thought you might tell me if it was a good try! The bed is now coldPassionate flames extinguishedBy unspoken wordsI am going to try some more writing. It is helpful reading many blogs by writers. ~^0-0^~ Poon
MMMM Marjo! And look, you are inspiring others!I will say it's a good try, Poon!
I agree with my friend Polly, Poon. Indeed your haiku is at least as good as mine. I am still very new to them myself ; -)You must tell soon where in the world you are, Poon..and what your mother tongue is(?).
Hello again,Thanks to you! I have tried some more Haiku. (Ha, ha, there is a rhyme). I have another one for you at the end.I am from the Yunnan Province where there are many cultures represented but now I am in Canada for school. Edi says to tell you mine is a mixture of “dialects”. In my great great grandfather’s time this made trading easier but that is another story. I have been studying for exams in but I wrote this:The blossom blushesFragrant anticipationA sun-drenched, first kissEdi thinks I am a romantic dreamer but that is okay because she is too! Ha Ha.~^0-0^~ Poon
Hello Poon,Yunnan is diverse in its natural setting, perfect for a writer of Haikus! I genuinely enjoyed this last one you have posted here - it's lovely. If I were you, I would not use the comma though. The words stand very well on their own.Keep on writing,Marjo.
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