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Monday, 26 November 2007
November Haiku
The warm pretty quilt On my half-empty bed covers icy long ago dreams.
5 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Hello again!
My friend Edi thinks that I should show you my Haiku. When I read yours I liked it very much! SO, I spoke one right away. Edi wrote it down, she thought you might tell me if it was a good try!
The bed is now cold Passionate flames extinguished By unspoken words
I am going to try some more writing. It is helpful reading many blogs by writers.
I agree with my friend Polly, Poon. Indeed your haiku is at least as good as mine. I am still very new to them myself ; -) You must tell soon where in the world you are, Poon..and what your mother tongue is(?).
Thanks to you! I have tried some more Haiku. (Ha, ha, there is a rhyme). I have another one for you at the end.
I am from the Yunnan Province where there are many cultures represented but now I am in Canada for school. Edi says to tell you mine is a mixture of “dialects”. In my great great grandfather’s time this made trading easier but that is another story.
I have been studying for exams in but I wrote this:
The blossom blushes Fragrant anticipation A sun-drenched, first kiss
Edi thinks I am a romantic dreamer but that is okay because she is too! Ha Ha.
Yunnan is diverse in its natural setting, perfect for a writer of Haikus! I genuinely enjoyed this last one you have posted here - it's lovely. If I were you, I would not use the comma though. The words stand very well on their own.
5 comments:
Hello again!
My friend Edi thinks that I should show you my Haiku. When I read yours I liked it very much! SO, I spoke one right away. Edi wrote it down, she thought you might tell me if it was a good try!
The bed is now cold
Passionate flames extinguished
By unspoken words
I am going to try some more writing. It is helpful reading many blogs by writers.
~^0-0^~ Poon
MMMM Marjo! And look, you are inspiring others!
I will say it's a good try, Poon!
I agree with my friend Polly, Poon. Indeed your haiku is at least as good as mine. I am still very new to them myself ; -)
You must tell soon where in the world you are, Poon..and what your mother tongue is(?).
Hello again,
Thanks to you! I have tried some more Haiku. (Ha, ha, there is a rhyme). I have another one for you at the end.
I am from the Yunnan Province where there are many cultures represented but now I am in Canada for school. Edi says to tell you mine is a mixture of “dialects”. In my great great grandfather’s time this made trading easier but that is another story.
I have been studying for exams in but I wrote this:
The blossom blushes
Fragrant anticipation
A sun-drenched, first kiss
Edi thinks I am a romantic dreamer but that is okay because she is too! Ha Ha.
~^0-0^~ Poon
Hello Poon,
Yunnan is diverse in its natural setting, perfect for a writer of Haikus! I genuinely enjoyed this last one you have posted here - it's lovely. If I were you, I would not use the comma though. The words stand very well on their own.
Keep on writing,
Marjo.
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