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Tuesday 31 August 2010
standstill
Stand naked before her - hold your breath and listen to her words listen to their absence; Be still and wait until the girl in the mirror tells you it is safe. . .
I can't help myself, I have to express my reaction: this poem is very, very good ... such a wonderful construction, such a wonderful idea so well executed ... your artistry continues to grow =:>)
3 comments:
I can't help myself, I have to express my reaction: this poem is very, very good ... such a wonderful construction, such a wonderful idea so well executed ... your artistry continues to grow
=:>)
This is really good. I like the imagery as much as the truth of it.
..must say, I'm surprised at poz reviews on this one..thank you Stuart & Anthony!
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