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Tuesday, April 29, 2008

missing Poon & Edi...<>

6 comments:

Edi--G@live.ca said...

hey girl, we’re still fans! busy after end of school trying to make money for next year’s courses. Poon, paranoid that he is, rarely e-mails from home and i have come to accept that.

you posted something that i found powerful and it ended with “if”. i can’t find it. why did you take it down?

keep writing!
your friend Edi

Marjolaine Hébert said...

ahh..got my fix ; -) it's good to hear from you, Edi! and thanks for confirming Poon's whereabouts - political silence & fear is such a sad thing.

the 'if'..yes..she says smiling... i felt confident the parts of this experimental poem would fall into place by morning, but it didn't. did i dream it away?...

marjo

Edi--G@live.ca said...

could you send me the piece that you had written? i liked it just the way it was!

thx
your friend Edi

Marjolaine Hébert said...

took me a while to find...i can't send it because i don't know your email addy (my email is available through my profile, btw)
i would LoVe to have you write the words that follow!..?

I’ll fake it through the pain that
you supply
if...

(it means having [him]
by my side) these would have come next, i think.

Cheers!

Edi--G@live.ca said...

me again! thanks, i am hesitant to try and write anything (it is yours!), i like reading more than writing, it's Poon that is trying to transform his thoughts into words (hilarious sometimes!).anyway i did give it a try (must confess i had some help)i hope it isn't too weird

i’ll fake it
through the pain
that you supply
if...

contradiction
did not cut me
so

i’ll fake it
through the pain
that you supply
if…

desire
could see through
darkened eyes

i’ll fake it
through the pain
that you supply
if…

suspicion
did not betray
self-worth

i’ll fake it
through the pain
that you supply
if…

love
allowed me to
leave

Edi--G@live.ca is my e

Marjolaine Hébert said...

Cool! So glad you went for it - I like the sentiments expressed, as well as the format used. Thanks : -)